"One has not truly enjoyed life until they've experienced the most marvelous thing ever: a big belly."

~Anonymous.

Hello, again, Axl! I am on a critiquing high, currently (is there even such a thing? haha!), and thought that while it lasts, I'd expend the energy towards this sexy piece of Carrie Stone belly art~

Goddess of bad decisions, indeed. As far as I (and many others) are concerned, though, this was a very good decision on her part :333

I really loved the belly in the pic a whole lot, and it's very comical to see the tiny, er... monster things attempting to hoist up her engorged gut. Most oft I'll find that belly artists will attempt to strike our funny bone, which you have done successfully here. Made me chuckle xD

Something I appreciate artists doing is going the extra mile and adding in tiny little details and perhaps even a few easter eggs that make the picture a whole lot better. For example, the stuffed yellow monster in the corner, the wobbliness of her belly as they try to hold it up, the little feet behind the belly that let you know it's not just the front monsters doing the job, and the ones up top delivering the glowing fruit into her mouth... this all makes the situation Carrie's gotten herself into more entertaining and realistic, if you will ;D

And, of course, you do an excellent job with shading. The green colors you've chosen fit Carrie very well, and the one thing I like about her the most is her cute hairstyle and dark green hair. Blurring the background out is neat little trick to help us focus on the drawing, yet still be able to appreciate the scenery if we take a few more moments to look behind our blimped up heroine <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="395" title=" (Lick)"/>

I also enjoyed the way her legs are kinda leaning forward, as if her stomach is beginning to pull her forward, and her panicked expression.

Your signature technique once again shines through, delivering to us a sloshy creepette that portrays your softer coloring style excellently. The only thing I'd say to work on is a bit more detail with the feet, but that's about it P:

And, if I may, going off something Noir commented on, I'm going to have to disagree with what he says about the belly.

Upon closer inspection, you can see where the line of her bloated tummy begins (just below Carrie's boobs), and where it ends (near that squeezable love handle of hers). There's a part in the middle where you can tell her once flat tummy had been, and how it's now ballooned outwards.

It's just how it should be <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="395" title=" (Lick)"/>

Overall, great job on this (and the sequel!), I love it lots. Everything about this picture comes together very well, and the plot that you provide gives us more insight into Carrie's adorable character ;3

Sweet job, great OC, keep it (and the feeding) up! ;D